Thursday, June 18, 2015

Life Changes Quickly Comments

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How are life gets so busy,
Every night memories turn dizzy,
Never feel the toast of friendship we had,
We cant go there,
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Tahil Mirza
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Chinedu Dike 27 June 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Unchanging nature of change is an existential reality about life. Love indeed is the highest level of human civilization. A lovely poem with nice rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 18 June 2015

Excellent advice, Tahill. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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