Wednesday, May 9, 2007

Life Force Comments

Rating: 5.0

Torn apart by wind streams
Flying past on currents unseen
No longer resembling any text book formations
Scudding by on a hastened path
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David Taylor
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Marci Made 10 May 2007

This write shows you at your best. Just a joie de vivre straight ex ani-mo. The ending leaves me with a smile and for a moment here I felt that life is grand. merci, marci.xo

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Ernestine Northover 09 May 2007

We all seem to be continuously spiralling out of control David. What is a settled life, no one knows. Lovely piece of work here. Beautiful ending. Love Ernestine XXX

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Original Unknown Girl 09 May 2007

David, this is a blinder! The final lines really sew it together perfectly... HG: -) xx

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