Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 397,847 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Life In Isolation - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Life in isolation

In no way it helps to be alone
You are constantly facing fear of cyclone
It may sometime never come and strike
You may only be dreaming and flying kite

You have accepted pessimism as only way
That is driving you miles away
From reality and pushing to the brink
It may further force you to sink

You can have no peace at all
When respond to unreasonable call
No one has succeeded in isolation
In seclusion alone without having relation

Life may come to standstill
The inner conscious may loose strong will
Even though you are in life
But always fearful of loosing with knife

Life is no life without company
This has been experienced by many
No one has appreciated it so far
We can’t lead the life by looking at star

Think of the fact that you are human
It is good quality of man and woman
The truth must be clearly borne in mind
There are ways to come out of it and find

It is clear tendency on your part to kill
Lack of strength, enough of confidence and good will
You must live by self but not alone
Those days are definitely gone

You are young and energetic
Life can’t be stagnated or made static
There is so much to live by ideals
Life may then seem as and real

If at all you are not told
Face the truth and be bold
Life is yours and soul must obey
This is how you find sun and bright ray

This fear is unreal and only exists in mind
Some of the bare facts may appeal even to blind
Rest your mind not on imaginary facts
Start new life and don’t hastily act

Make it sure that you are master
You must gain time and move on faster
Life is to be caught up with speed and zeal
It may make difference for you to feel


Comments about Life In Isolation by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/15/2011 2:42:00 AM)


    Sonu Sonal
    A master poem indeed..life is sure not be lived secluded..human beings need company to share..one has to come out in open and start afresh.
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  • Dylan Dowrick (12/14/2011 10:44:00 PM)


    the use of rhyme makes the poem very stumble-ey and hard to read. sorry. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 14, 2011



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