Life Is Beatiful... Poem by Sikta Anurakta

Life Is Beatiful...

Rating: 4.8


Looks are deceptive
while feelings are genuine.

Demeanour is manipulative,
satisfaction is precision.

Traits are fake
and yet heading for a fete.

Mind is gibberish
still heart is pure.

And if deeds are pretentious
result is whole some flop.

Travelling may be your passion
yet your job won't let u do so on.

Material life seems to be breath-taking
yet it will lead for an obsession of drinking & smoking.

Life may be lucrative
yet your sins are figurative.

Foes, job & in-laws may be awful
but we love to hum on
'LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL'
and go on and on and on.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakesh Bedi 16 August 2009

A nice poem, sikta; try to handle one topic/subject in one poem. Keep it up and my good wishes!

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Marieta Maglas 16 August 2009

i like this: ''Mind is gibberish still heart is pure'' wonderful poem about life........10

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Olivia Riggan 16 August 2009

Lovly! . I loved it. Very true...

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Rabindra Sahu 31 October 2009

Your thoughts are so beautiful, your life ought to be Beautiful. There is no doubt about it. Best of luck.

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Sikta Anurakta 20 August 2009

From : Arkay Dass (India ;) To : Sikta Anurakta Date Time : 8/17/2009 4: 58: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : life is beautiful hii yes life isbeautiful inspite of ups and down, , nice thought nicely poeticised.. rk

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Reetessh Sabrr 18 August 2009

a nice attempt to look with a positive eye amidst all negative forces... sikta loved ur expression...

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Miriam Maia Padua 17 August 2009

Very nice...wisdom thoughts.. very thoughts' provoking piece... lots of lessons can be get from her... 'looks are deceptive..' but mine is not...(smile) thanks for inviting, Sikta..i love your works.. with strong appeal..yet their is softness in it too.. 10+++ please try to read mine if you have time.. Lovelots, Maia

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 August 2009

Foes, job &in-laws may be awful but we love to hum on 'LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL' and go on and on and on........it goes on and we live on...s beautifully said.. very good piece of writing. iloved it....10 read mine miss i miss u... life is wroth...a place called home...all trains stop here

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