Looks are deceptive
while feelings are genuine.
Demeanour is manipulative,
satisfaction is precision.
Traits are fake
and yet heading for a fete.
Mind is gibberish
still heart is pure.
And if deeds are pretentious
result is whole some flop.
Travelling may be your passion
yet your job won't let u do so on.
Material life seems to be breath-taking
yet it will lead for an obsession of drinking & smoking.
Life may be lucrative
yet your sins are figurative.
Foes, job & in-laws may be awful
but we love to hum on
'LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL'
and go on and on and on.....
i like this: ''Mind is gibberish still heart is pure'' wonderful poem about life........10
Your thoughts are so beautiful, your life ought to be Beautiful. There is no doubt about it. Best of luck.
From : Arkay Dass (India ;) To : Sikta Anurakta Date Time : 8/17/2009 4: 58: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : life is beautiful hii yes life isbeautiful inspite of ups and down, , nice thought nicely poeticised.. rk
a nice attempt to look with a positive eye amidst all negative forces... sikta loved ur expression...
Very nice...wisdom thoughts.. very thoughts' provoking piece... lots of lessons can be get from her... 'looks are deceptive..' but mine is not...(smile) thanks for inviting, Sikta..i love your works.. with strong appeal..yet their is softness in it too.. 10+++ please try to read mine if you have time.. Lovelots, Maia
Foes, job &in-laws may be awful but we love to hum on 'LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL' and go on and on and on........it goes on and we live on...s beautifully said.. very good piece of writing. iloved it....10 read mine miss i miss u... life is wroth...a place called home...all trains stop here
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice poem, sikta; try to handle one topic/subject in one poem. Keep it up and my good wishes!