Friday, May 4, 2018

Life Is Hard For Us All Comments

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Life is hard for us all
Challenges we will face each day
It is a big dance
Obstacles are there in every way
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Ronell Warren Alman
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Bri Edwards 22 May 2018

i agree it is inspirational........or should i say depressing! ? it sounds like a poem to be offered to a group of needy/downcast/hurting/etc. people. i really don't agree with lines 1,4, and 7! ! Please don't tell me i've been lucky enough to be the only one in the world with a (relatively) easy and comfortable life! i won't believe you! ! but it is a well-written piece. bri :)

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