Life Like A Bonus! Poem by Liza Sud

Life Like A Bonus!

Not to look in front -
but to look up high -
may be to change the focus?

then the false passion
that seemed true - will die
And you'll feel life like gift and bonus!

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Не смотреть вперед,
а взглянуть наверх -
может, так изменить фокус?

тогда ложная страсть,
как обман, умрет,
жизнь предстанет как дар, как бонус!

Thursday, March 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 10 March 2016

Is the point of te first stana tat we focus our attention on heaven over earth? You say do't look ahead as we do on eart but look upward. OK Then in te second stanza it appears heaven says abandon FALSE PASSION. Everything false should be dropped: false ideas, false values, false passion. B-U-T ideas, values, passions are all good. RIGHT? ! Once the falseness is abandoned all three are good. Ageed? !

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