Charl JF Cilliers

Gold Star - 5,763 Points (25 January 1941 / Cape Town, South Africa)

Life’s Choices - Poem by Charl JF Cilliers

Life’s choices
never made

trinkets hoarded
seldom looked at again

always new, polished
as promises,
next season’s rain

silent as the memory
of a long-departed train.

Topic(s) of this poem: metaphysical

Form: Free Verse

Comments about Life’s Choices by Charl JF Cilliers

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/8/2015 11:54:00 PM)

    silent as the memory
    of a long-departed train...Metaphysically wonderful expression definitely. Wise poem shared definitely.10
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    Charl Cilliers (11/9/2015 12:08:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind words, Kumarmani!

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2015

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