Life's Drama Poem by CHRISTOPHER EBENEZER

Life's Drama

Rating: 4.5


A fault is well and better seen
By one who plays a watching role
In life's interesting drama play
Some ones will often shoot their words
At every actors inching move
Their words will speak of so much things
In one, is how so bad they act
In two, they shoot the weakened heels
That causes them to blunder lines
In three, they write them off to hell
Some ones have healing words they speak
In one, is point there faults to them
That teaches them to better act
In two, is give them balm to heal
Those things that makes them blunder lines
In three, is give them hope to act
On and on to higher grounds.
What ever way it wants to go
The actors are that cause a change
And print there foots on time’s old sands
Along with those with healing balm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mercy Kankara 10 July 2010

Life indeed is a drama, so easy to point out the fault of others while we overlook ours.The poem depicts alot of morals....

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Amrit Rathi 19 June 2010

A great poem with message how actors respond to the response of those having watching role. [The actors are that cause a change And print there foots on time’s old sands Along with those with healing balm] I rated it 9/10. Thanks for inviting.

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Lovely poem. depicts life's unfolding lessons. Great job! ; D

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