It’s the way he curves his lips
To me
That makes their brows to knit
It’s the way he bids me come
“My son”
That makes them all to scorn
It’s the way he teaches me
The truth
That keeps them at his heels
It’s the way he forgives me
My sins
That makes them doubt him more
It’s the way he heals off my
Disease
That makes them call him names
It’s the way he shows me
Total love
That makes them hate him more
It’s the way my Jesus lived
His life to show me how to live
That made their heart to crave
The day that they would see him hanged
A nice story about 'The Way Jesus Is' It's clear you have a breadth of knowledge of Jesus' discourses. good job
this is a good poem and you are on the right track with Jesus. Continue to write and we will continue to read. You will see that improvement comes with experience. Good work.Keep it up. Lynn
You nailed his life completely. That is a very detailed summary of what He did to serve us. Keep writing dude!
Loved the way you portrayed the Character of Jesus! Simply beautiful. God Bless.; D
Sometimes a terrible price has to be paid for integrity. Thanks for sharing. john
Nice write i enjoyed it and the message you were getting across
Hi Chris... This is a very powerfully descriptive write that put a picture in your mind of the story of a special man. One who worked his way in your and many others lives forever... you get an awesome presence in this poem that invigorates you as you read it. Very well written and expressed Chris! Top poem from you! Dale :)
wow Christopher, this is a very beautiful poem. The words are so true and right.this is a 10! ahh just so beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem! ..........Simply amazing :)