Friday, April 20, 2012

Life's Game (Thought) Comments

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If life is a game,
What are the odds I might win?
Give me a tally, what out of ten?
If all I had was my name,
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Poet of the River
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Kevin Patrick 04 May 2012

For some people life is postponed, I know its a struggle but its the only struggle we have, success is frightening because it means we have to reach another level, another level with more difficulty and some times it makes us want to stay at one level, but we have to give it a chance.

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Captain Cur 20 April 2012

Concise and too the point. Simply written but deep. What is considered a successful life?

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Poet of the River

Poet of the River

California, but move around a lot.
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