Life Unfolds Comments

I completely love this poem. Great pen work. This is how I feel some times. never knowing on what to do next

Yes, the conundrum that is life, no one or nothing to give you clear answers as to why something or someone is the way they are, why things happens and all the inner games we play with ourselves trying to interpret...my suggestion (and I have to remind myself of this often) is to get outside of your head, do something physical then go back to the mind games, they tend to be more winnable after that :) Great stuff, keep it up, and please check out my poems too, I'd appreciate it...

Beautifully written with insight. Highly inspirational. IN BAD THOUGHTS YOU DROWN, that's depression rearing its ugly head. I like the articulation of the poem and conviction of the poet. A lovely piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.