Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 520,123 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Life Was Zero - Poem by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Life was zero
But started with one
Went up the hill top
Journey remained non stop

It was all we could do as best
Now was the time to rest
Enjoy the fruit and spend the time
But where was the peace any time?

So far it has remained adventurous
Now it should not remain continuous
One must take deep breath and spread the leg
'So far life was successful' must bear the tag


Comments about Life Was Zero by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/10/2012 9:44:00 PM)


    Pratap Singh.. Excellent n Nice...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

    NEERAJ BHUSHAN BEAUTIFUL.

    ?? ? ?? danuta BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL *(*-*) *
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/10/2012 9:44:00 PM)


    Tere Lara THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR LOVELY WORDS IN POEMS! (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/10/2012 9:41:00 PM)


    merlyn d
    life is a continuous struggle between good and evil but having good triumph in the end is a worthy fight
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2012 11:12:00 PM)


    Monoj
    O sir, Life wasn't Zero.................. good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2012 9:57:00 PM)


    Life was zero
    But started with one
    Went up the hill top
    Journey remained non stop
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 9, 2012


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