Friday, January 22, 2016

Life - What Are The Things That Eat At You Comments

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What are the things that eat at you
In the quiet times when you think it through
Do you mull over a time
When you should have been better in your rhyme
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Paul Warren
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Douglas Scotney 22 January 2016

Paul, this one rhymes better than the superheroes one in which the search for rhyme seems desperate and leads to loss of meaning.

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Nosheen Irfan 22 January 2016

We all have some regret in life at one time or the other. This poem is a quiet and calm reflection on life. It brings on a mood of introspection and some soul-searching.

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