Life without you
Is what I can’t pretend is normal
It’s a life without love
A life without trust
It’s going with no where to go
I dread this world of hate and pain
But you make it bearable
Without you I suffer horribly
Its life without love I fear
Its moving on with you gone
Its losing you and me too
You illuminate the pain of lost love strongly throughout this short poem. Nicely done and thank you for letting me read and comment on your work. L&T
A true expression of what Love means to many of us. Your insight is not measured in years. I sence it has more to do with your convictions about life... Your passion, and emotion are written between the lines Stay strong in your beliefs, your poetry has meaning...
A poem full of maturity for one so young, fuul of feeling and passion good write top marks Chris
A lot of heart is penned in this piece Danielle Well done in showing the emotion
This is a very well written piece - honest and real... I hope the fear of love will subside leaving all you want and need...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Simple and moving! Greatly emotional.