Lifespan Wasted Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Lifespan Wasted

Rating: 4.5


Lifespan wasted

Monday,21st, May 2018

Poetry is good
when you have understood
the theme and the spirit
then only you should feel fit

it is no joke
when you offer masterstroke
without any aim
and then claim relevance

you must have the sensible heart
that understands the human art
its agony and plight
and vows to make it right

when grief is shared
the humanity is dared
the sentiments are cared
the fragrance is spread

what is the use of the life
if that remains torn with strife
each time you cry with the woes
and lifetime is simply wasted

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

From

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

what is the use of the life if that remains torn with strife each time you cry with the woes and lifetime is simply wasted Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

0 0 Reply
Castellenas John 12 March 2019

Honest and powerful words shared. Wasted life, is a sad ending.

0 0 Reply

God gave us this unusual gift and we must be glad to have used this special skill in a great way. Our life in poetry writing can never be a waste as it could touch the hearts of many readers who will be glad they came across your work that day. Kudos to you Mehta ji.God only can really know the worth of your labour and may be, some fellow poets. Keep up your spirits and keep writing for the sake of writing poetry. Dr John Celes, Coimbatore, May 21,2018

0 0 Reply

welcome Mariara López Friend Friends

0 0 Reply

welcome Mariara López Friend Friends

0 0 Reply

welcome Сиддхарт Путин 4 mutual friends 1 Manage Like · Reply · 1m

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Close
Error Success