Thursday, October 25, 2007

Light And Movement Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sky is blue bright sunshine shows
the changing colours of the trees.
Which ripple in the playful breeze
A changing tapestry that glows
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Ernestine Northover 25 October 2007

Excellent piece. Super read. Terrific flow. A really smashing poem. Great rhyming too. Top marks - 100 points or more. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Thad Wilk 25 October 2007

Nice Ivor! Can't forget Mother Nature! Well done! Thad

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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