Friday, August 1, 2014

Light Of The Crescent Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see the world dancing in the light of the crescent moon
Atop the rippled waves of a tropical lagoon
A thousand bits of silver light illuminate the darkest night
And all the mountains turn to sand as they succumb to the oceans hand
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Rogers Joseph Brown
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Jazib Kamalvi 26 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Rogers. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Daniel Brick 09 August 2014

The crescent moon is such a lovely shape so fragile and transient but when its light illuminates two people whose love puts them in sync we have the best that life can offer. I noticed there was a foreshadowing of their bliss in the sunrise and ocean kissing. I'm sure there is a Greek myth about this. Your poem creates a great vista for the imagination which is breathtaking but at the end it focuses on just two tiny people.

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F J Thomas 01 August 2014

RJ WOW! ! The beauty of every image you've shared. You need not an artists brush to paint and artists picture. Entrancing Rogers.

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