Like A Bird In The Sky.. Comments

'But I do know it very well that once in my life, I'll fly, Like a bird in this unbounded sky' - Wonderful expression of self determination. Nice poem, well done!

made it my firm determination, That with full dedication, I will try my utmost to achieve highest education And then with flying colours I will be able to pass life's all examination....a poem of great determination. Girls should be like this. my prayer is that so many girls of your age read it and become great and fly.. thank you. tony

Motivational train of thought, well articulated and nicely penned in good poetic diction with conviction. If one's faith endures surely the individual will endure. Faith keeps those that keep the faith. Thanks for sharing Tanya. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

Beautifully conceived meaningful poem though a bit away from reality in the era of empowerment of women evident everywhere at least in urban India. I liked it's conclusion on a positive note. Thanks for sharing.