Like Adam And Eva Poem by Liza Sud

Like Adam And Eva

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I wanted to eat your sperm
up to the last drop.
I wanted to feel it go
inside me, deep in my throat.

Why cannot my lips
just be like glued to you -
so that never to seperate
our drink or food.

Why I can't become the flow
of your thoughts, words and blood?
Just not to think on my own?
but to become your part!

Just to love you, the whole,
as any of your parts?
Knees, breast, and each hole,
each pore, each turn of tongue!

Was there any moment,
when you didn't love your body?
It's impossible for the flow
of your sparkling blood, my darling!

And your blood-soul, my darling -
is the God's part forever.
We are together united -
the whole, like Adam and Eva.

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Я хотела есть твою сперму,
всю, до последней капли,
следить за ее теченьем,
вовнутрь, глубоко в гортани.

Почему мои губы не могут
быть склеены с тобой -
чтобы неразделенной
были наши питье с едой.

Почему мне не стать потоком,
мыслей, крови и слов,
чтоб не быть разделенной
с частью твоей, любовь.

Чтобы любить всецело,
как каждая твоя часть,
колени, грудь, поры тела,
каждый взмах языка.

Есть ли когда-то мгоновенья,
когда ты не любил свое тело?
для искрящейся крови
Невозможно, любимый, это.

Кровь-душа твоя, милый, -
это часть Бога все время.
так мы соединились
навек, как Адам и Ева.

Monday, August 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 15 August 2016

Dear Liza, this is such a primal poem, it goes way back to our origins in the Garden and pulls that blessed place forward into our time. This is your Garden Poem about us to parallel my Garden Sonnets from early summer. I've read it three times already and I still want to read it again and let your words wash over me. These words heal what is sick, comfort what is hurt, celebrate what is joyful, connect what is separated. I'm trying to imagine your voice reciting this poem. I heard your voice at your website reciting in Russian, you were wearing a red sweater. And after each section you looked up from the page and looked out briefly as if searching for someone to rest your eyes on. My sight rested on you then. They're searching for you now. I can hear your voice speaking the last two lines which are so wonderful: WE ARE TOGETHER UNITED - THE WHOLE, LIKE ADAM AND EVA.// Dear Liza, I hesitated for a long time before typing this last passage: but here I go: Twice in the last stanzas you say, my darling; am I that one you address as darling? // I paused again because I don't want to cause you distress, but this poem speaks with such a clear voice of love, I want to echo it in my words, in my poem, directly and openly.

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Liza Sudina 16 August 2016

yes, to you.

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