Like Heroin Poem by Jerad Castaneda

Like Heroin



Have You Ever Had Someone That You Need Like A Drug?
Someone So Addicting, That It Feels Like Forever Intill you Get Your Next Fix? She's Like Heroin To Me. I Can Feel Her Running Thru My Veins, Her Kisses Feel Like Fire To My Skin, Her Love is Like The Welcoming Needle Brushing The Skin Of An Addict. She Leaves Me Jonesing For More, I've Never Felt So Good, So High, So Free, But When She Leaves
It's The Worse Crash Ever, I Feel Like I'll Never Be That High Again, That Free Again, That Good Again. But Onces She's Back In My Arms I Feel The High Just Come Rushing Back To Me.
So I Ask You Again Do You Have A Love Like Heroin?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 20 October 2009

Hahaha, I do :) but shhh dont let him know that. Very good critique. metaphor as a addict, amazingly well put

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