Thursday, May 7, 2015

Lips On Fire Comments

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I have swollen lips from devouring your roses
cocktails, lips juice, and little pieces of your mouth
You don't know which one is your tongue
you've gone mad by the drugs of my kisses
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Jean Carlos Acosta Amador
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Chinedu Dike 07 May 2015

The fire and fierce kiss of hungry lips well depicted in the poem. A lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Thanks for reading and for your comment. It will be nice to read your poem

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Kelly Kurt 07 May 2015

A sultry poem. Thanks for sharing, Juan Carlos

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Jean Carlos Acosta Amador

Jean Carlos Acosta Amador

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