Saturday, July 13, 2013

Little Boy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Little Boy when you rest
My soul in waves of joy
Dance and quiver from my heart
That here within this feeling starts
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ian strider
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Naila Rais 23 April 2018

A nice write.... Keep it up.. I would like you read my poems and express your views too... Naila

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 April 2018

Write comment. A good start, ian. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Heather Wilkins 14 July 2013

a well written poem. a little boy close to your heart. enjoyed the read

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Jayne Davies 13 July 2013

What a beautiful poem, with such soothing rhythm! Well done, an enjoyable poem!

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ian Adams 12 February 2015

I noticed a writing error, sorry should be sorrow, regards

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ian strider 26 June 2018

why thank you very much for your comment. l thought so too.

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