Friday, October 2, 2009

Little Girl Run Comments

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LITTLE GIRL RUN!

Little girl wandering, petals detached
Floating, dreaming, castle and moat
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tess fielders
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John Knight 26 March 2010

Hi Tess - I am honoured to be the first to comment on this sad poem. This is a warning to all little girls. Verses 1 & 2 paint a lovely picture of a carefree young girl with all the hopes and apirations of youth. V 3 Pants a warning - beware littlr girl there are nasty people lying in wait and ready to pounce. V 4 High emotion in the final line 'Otherwise sweetpea - your bodies doomed'. Do men realise the lifelong damage they condemn little girls to - when they are seduced prematurely. They never get over it and can themselves become hard and cruel towards young people (under 16) . Perhaps they should undergo a penectomy which would cure them once and for all time.. Love in Poetry - JOHN

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