Monday, June 24, 2013

Little Hope Comments

Rating: 5.0

-Standing alone in the rain,
trying to see through the dark.
Standing lonely and wondering,
do you feel my heart?
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Dave Walker 08 July 2013

Another great song. Great flow to it.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 June 2013

A fine songlike poem i enjoyd. Lyrical nice. Do read mine poem too.

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