Wednesday, February 6, 2019

Living A Borrowed Alien Dream Comments

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If only I lived up to my measure,
And stopped living a borrowed alien dream,
Yet, an alien word has been my pleasure
That has put me in a plight all so grim.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 February 2019

Some of the out comes of intricacies of life developed with growing age create definite traits like doubting own standards and comparisons with others. The psychological turmoil caused by the developments beautifully brought out. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 February 2019

You're right Ratnakar Mandlik and thanks for visiting my poem and giving feedback.

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