Tyler Tillett

Living Dead Girl

I called her. She didn't answer.
Something is wrong. I know it, I can feel it.
Her light is on; it is bright, very bright. I opened the door.
I feel a cold draft coming at me.
It feels like 10 degrees. I see her zoning out. She has a smile on her face. I wonder why. The window is wide open, there is snow on the ground. I saw terror in her eyes. I start to smell blood. Maybe I could have smelt blood when I came in to her room but was to distracted on looking for her.
I see the cats liking her wrist. I wonder why. I see blood on the floor, in a puddle next to her.
Am I too late? Will she survive? Why did she do this? I can’t think.
I was disturbed by the way she laugh and laugh at the pain. Evan though she is laughing, you could see the terror in her eyes.

Tyler Tillett
1/28/2009

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 29, 2008
Poem Edited: Thursday, March 13, 2008

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Comments about Living Dead Girl by Tyler Tillett

  • Niq Castro (3/12/2008 8:34:00 AM)

    it reminds me of deep #$%.... i got it! ... deep hell and oblivion...
    but i like it.... good job =^.^=

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  • Amanda Pavel (3/9/2008 8:48:00 PM)

    Gore, pain, all add up to one hell of a poem. Well written
    :)

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  • Sparklle Rainne (3/8/2008 12:57:00 AM)

    I adore this one. It reminds me quite a lot of the girl I like. So much that it near made me cry, in fact. It is very good.

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  • Rae Rae (3/7/2008 11:50:00 PM)

    geat visuals, very vivid images

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  • Sarah Macbean (2/3/2008 12:58:00 PM)

    its really good, the tension of wanting to know what happens and how it ends, keeps your eyes moving down the screen. well done

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  • Peter A. Crowther (2/3/2008 3:28:00 AM)

    I like the way you gradually increase the sense of drama and terror

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  • Dislocated Heart (2/3/2008 3:24:00 AM)

    very nice piece of work you wrote. great job!
    -Justin

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  • Arfa Karim (2/3/2008 3:21:00 AM)

    Very nicely put and very creative. I wish you best of luck to continue writing poems like that. Good job.

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  • Jeong Jung (1/30/2008 1:07:00 PM)

    Interesting poem.
    Very Nice.

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  • Chilee Tipton (1/30/2008 1:03:00 PM)

    great job. looks like something i would write at times.

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  • dripping heart (1/30/2008 11:12:00 AM)

    kinda reminds me of somethin i would write...good job man

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