Living In Despair Poem by Abdallah Farouq

Living In Despair

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i still remember being in depth of despair
when i had lost da loved once and those who care
when di mind shutter givin nothin but suffer
nd when evry breath is a gasp for air thinking life is just unfair

i got to hold tied to da ropes of light
wer ill find hope and gain sight
from what i didnt see and try to fight
regainin all dat i had lost
and making up 4 all faults

so i had to hold tight to the ropes of light changin sorrow to delight
givin my self anotherday and looking for a brighter day
ma god its hard to say many are livin it 2 day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rand El-khalaf 22 April 2009

Your poems are Beautiful-this one reminds me of myself. Hope is the key to success in this life. Without hope, we're nothing. Without hope we have no dreams. And without dreams we can't live. Cling to the rope of hope and light-and never let go. Hope is just like the bright candle-it brightens our life and it's something we must shield, with both hands!

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Miriam Maia Padua 19 January 2009

great write... AN INSPIRATION to anybody who lost hope coz of pain showing faith and trust in God.. the will to move on inspite of trials and difficulties... 10++++...

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Tanya Stanford 16 August 2008

What an impactful poem. Meaningful, emotional and dramatic. Love the poem. Wish you had more for me to read.10/10

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Ashley Seymour 13 August 2008

Awesome! Can't wait to see more of your work!

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Zoe Gonzales 13 August 2008

i really loved your poem its so true

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