Eh! living with a crack is so hard,
How to mend a broken heart? ?
Don’t blame me! if I wrong..
Its just, Im suffering since long
Help me in finding a lost key,
Help me to forget & letting me free..
I'm confused & all this making me mad
I wish this crack, I didn’t had…
T@R@
Will shine always
the comment by ata my friend is so apt and true.....dont get rid of this crack..thats the essence of poetic stuff...we wont want to lose a member; -) but your lines are great...touching light and balanced liked it
Now this one is GREAT..... Love the Image os the Crack and the Lost Key... Good write..
Having a crack is very bad, hurtful. But then again, it makes us good poets at times: -) Good one Laila
You can but suffer the light it is always going to shine.. the broken heart never mends pour replacement's are my lip's...iip..much to great art thou..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Cracks hurt! But at least its only a crack and its not fallen into pices. Cracks take shorter time to heal than putting pice by pice back together. good poem :)