Local Dive Poem by L MILTON HANKINS

Local Dive



Davy's band plays weekend gigs
at Carrie's club;
Saturday nights the place
is packed; from
Grease to glitter
in one hour;
turning pro
Even though it's not up-town yet.
The crowd is slow and easy here;
Hard stuff never sells as well as beer.
Davy draws the over-forties crowd
with disco in three-quarter
time; and slow dances,
and middle-aged clinging
Couples, wanting "Release Me" before
midnight; and when the last
set is over,
The band tears down in debt,
exits through the rear.
Mondays, brass and skins are stacked
in the maple crate
on a beatup, borrowed truck
And Davy pumps gas at Larry's
to make some bucks.

Monday, August 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: entertainment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Lutwyche 19 September 2020

You paint a picture of this night very well. The over fourtie seem to be having a smashing old time. I like this poem, it's happy and good fun.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 31 August 2020

Great poem. I love the bit about the band leaving through the back door in debt.

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L MILTON HANKINS

L MILTON HANKINS

Hico Fayette Co West Virginia
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