Lola She Liked A Look Through The Window Comments
Into a colour lit night
Her dresses white hands transparent
A through thought penetrate glitter of the glass
Her colours were made of the white washed walls
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p1There is incredible imagery in this poem, the first four lines ending with the impact 'Her colours were made of the white washed walls'; sets up the raven imagery splintering into overlapping personalities fragile. The second stanza of
I wrote the poem 'Words Heard Echo Inner Eye Openning', inspired by the poem 'Lola She Liked A Look Through The Window', by the poet Miroslava Odalovic and dedicated to Miroslava Odalovic.
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p2questions leading into the last stanza line 'Resting nestling in the calm white lap' completes a caged bird image. I would have added a last line for you. 'A sweet song bird caged aged sings no more songs'