Tess Connor

Rookie - 0 Points (30/10/1992 / Mt Gambier)

Loneliness - Poem by Tess Connor

A lonely flower in a field
A lonely child does not yield
A lonely star in the night sky
A lonely man gives up to die
A lonely car in a lonely street
A lonely girl admits defeat
The loneliness affects us all
A gutless fight, a pitless fall
A lonely time in my daily routine
Sets the tone; a deserted scene
A lonely cow under a lonely tree
A lonely soldier, this is me

Comments about Loneliness by Tess Connor

  • (10/27/2013 11:48:00 PM)

    i love it! ! ! its beautiful! :) (Report) Reply

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  • (10/27/2013 11:48:00 PM)

    i love it! ! ! its beautiful! :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/15/2012 10:46:00 AM)

    I cried when I realized how true this was. (Report) Reply

  • (5/8/2012 2:35:00 PM)

    Wow totally luv it! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • (11/10/2011 12:32:00 AM)

    This poem is crafted and drafted well. I enjoyed this short poem and stood in boundless amazement at writers way of depicting the neglected things in the life.

    Hats off to the poet!
    I wonder if could see my poem on similar theme for its contrasting style :) :) :)

    Jingle-jangle! Mingle-mangle! A SINGLE RAT in Human Shirt Weeps in bingle!
    (Report) Reply

  • (11/1/2011 4:41:00 AM)

    I really like your poem! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 18, 2010

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