Loneliness Poem by moments of sadness

Loneliness

Rating: 5.0


Being without you
is
the equivalent of being diagnosed with a fatal condition
which
makes each day drag out long and painful as i await my fate

There is no one to nurse my wounds, no one to comfort me
nor
is there anyone to hold or console me, i'm just all alone

The loneliness eats away at me like a disease
and
the only remedy I know is you

but
you are not within my reach
so
there will be no cure

and
it seems that I shall truly die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nouri Black 04 November 2007

the poem its really nice and so true..u knw i always fell that way when ma love r far away frm me..verygood keep it up

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Swaroopa Rani 14 July 2007

I like this poem. Good narration with deep feeling.

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Hannah Mendoza 12 July 2007

I really like this poem!

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