Sunday, September 28, 2008

Lonely Is Where I Lay Tonight Comments

Rating: 4.8

Lonely Is where I lay tonight
I have your love, but still alone despite
Trying to sleep, wondering why I can’t
Have this love the way I had it planned
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Carita Blodgett
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 20 April 2009

u are quite passionate.. the poem asserts it.. beautiful poem

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 April 2009

love intense by desire absolute true love never befuudles even in dreams, still pain riffles in lone silence...quite passionate write,10++, thanks for sharing

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 September 2008

Lovely tone....nice read..well expressed passions......9

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