Friday, December 24, 2010

Lonely Winter Nights Comments

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A breeze blew out my candle,
My lamp ran out of kerosene.
Now I don't know how to handle,
The darkness, which leaves everything unseen.
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Juan Olivarez
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Pranab K Chakraborty 24 December 2010

Keep silence. Give darkness a way to your heart. Soon it will be transformed into a glow of heart. The light will enlighten the material darkness. Just don't go the lectric switch so quick, if you can spare a span of time for yourself and yourself only. Well written poet....metaphor and imagery is strong to catch the reader. Regards, pranab 10

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