DAVID GERARDINO

Rookie (9/19/1963)

Long Awaited Saint - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

PEASANTS transfixed in a botttomless pit,
the breath of the brethren turns into
spit , then a evil snake.
THE bride steps forward like a cherubim
in white, then the weapon tossed aside,
and in its place, one man, one world, one
long awaited saint.


Comments about Long Awaited Saint by DAVID GERARDINO

  • (5/23/2006 6:48:00 AM)


    This is a wonderful piece of poetry from the top draw,
    A really class act
    love Duncan
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (5/22/2006 10:16:00 AM)


    REVELATIONS...JOHN...THE 7 SEALS...AND DAVID PUTS IT ALL VERY NICELY INTO ONE CREATIVE CAPSULE....NICE WORK...
    SEVERAL YEARS AGO I GOT INVENTIVE(my good years) , and composed my own adaptation on armegeddon, using the scripts of St, John The Evangelist
    as resource & inspiration...You got me thinkin' 'bout bringin' that work out from the attic...tis quite long though...more of a short story, than prose...OK...I'M BACK IN
    MY COMMENT TO YOU...GREAT PENNING & THANKS FOR BATTIN' SOME UNUSED GREY MATTER BACK INTO THE MOTIVATIONAL MODE...FRANK
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 14, 2006



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