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Long Distance

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Oh winter how soon you will leave me
How soon you'll bereave me
And though I'll remember your seasonal sights,
your evergreens and birches converging for miles
These things are not nearly enough
I want us to touch

To fashion you into some tangible thing
Some newlywed's ring, attached to a finger
That I may look down and remember you - winter

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Sunday, March 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,dark,love,marriage,nature,romance,sad,trees,wedding,winter
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 December 2018

To fashion you into some tangible thing Some newlywed's ring, attached to a finger That I may look down and remember you - winter.........Winter as a symbol.. love and marriage, and wedding ring, sadness, romance......... so many points the reader has to derive from your poem. a very nice poem very original. thank u. tony

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