Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 398,644 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Look Around - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Look not around
When danger is found
Or you expect it to strike
Keep alert even if you do not like

It may not warn
But with sharp turn
Harm bodily
Leave you under shock completely

So take full control
Respond to inner call
Behave as if nothing has happened
Action should never be hastened

Your third sense may work
Even sharper than sword
It may retaliate at proper time
To act in self defense is no crime

Alert man never faces
Or crushingly races
Towards unknown object
When danger is ahead I n face

“Halt and proceed” he reacts fast
His move is unknown and does not last
Till the danger is cleared fully
He knows well that it is not over really

Comments about Look Around by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    Rohani Daud, Sundaram Krishnaswamy and Sarah Russell like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
    a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1
    (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 2:40:00 AM)

    gauthami R59 minutes ago
    this one was different and rather interesting too actually......: ]
    Comment +1
    Nice poetry piece
    (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 2:40:00 AM)

    Amber Wilson1 hour ago
    (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2013 1:26:00 AM)

    Look not around
    When danger is found
    (Report) Reply

Read all 4 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 8, 2013

[Report Error]