Looking For My Place Poem by nicholas casillas

Looking For My Place



My heart in two
O I cry for you
Come and fix me
Make me whole
Wipe my tears
Dont let them show
I hold my head
O its low to the floor
My hands do quiver
My body does shake
This is what uve done
Im no longer safe
Some one save me
This curse is to strong
I never did know
pain lasts this long
Give me a hand
O let it be pure
Tell me u love me
O make me whole
Be the pulse that makes me live
Make me pure
No more sin's
All i want is just one thing
And that is just to fit in

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Me 16 February 2010

really good poem.. very descriptive its like u paint pictures with ur words, i actually can feel the emotion in them: ] keep writing

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Jenny Sar 08 February 2008

i like this poem its good....keep writing great poem

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