The Darkness Poem by nicholas casillas

The Darkness



He watches every step you make
He knows every time you make a mistake
He slowly waits till your all alone
The night grows dark and your heart gets cold
Your in the darkness loosing time
If you look back you can see the darkness is behind
You loose the warmth in your hands
And the colors in your eyes
You can feel the darkness
You can feel him deep inside
Its to late to beg for forgivness
For Now its your time your time to die
For when he looks in your eyes you will drift away
The darkness swallows your life at once for you will never be forgivin
You will be tortured for the sins you have commited

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeanette Krantz 07 February 2008

Dark. Flowing. Good. Once simple souls feel the blackness and their worlds become dark. Keep writing poems! ! ! ! !

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Anthony Esposito 26 September 2006

WOW that was really good Nick cant wait to see more

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La Janine Garrett 25 September 2006

i think you will like Stephen Crane

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