Losing Them Poem by Amber Muth

Losing Them

Rating: 4.1


Grip of hands loosen,
Lost sight of what was there,
Bonds broken,
Eyes closed shut,
Heart beats slowly fade,
Sadness fills the mind,
Words shorten,
Tears fall gently,
Coldness preaches,
Deep glare toward the light,
Soft following of foot prints,
Comfort words to join,
Feeling of emptiness,
As the last tear sheds,
His life is told with in it,
Slowly drafted down to earth,
A thick sad circle is formed,
He may lie in rest,
But in peace as well,
In memory of his face,
We will never forget,
The moments we shared,
Throughout the time,
He was planted beyond us,
Now let me say,
As I see with my eyes,
Grips of our hands loosen,
Losing the site of him here,
Bonds between us break,
Eyes manually closed,
Not a single beat is to be felt,
Sadness is to be left upon us,
Words are hard to be spoken,
Yet our tears say enough,
Warmth has left him in such speed,
Noticing the beautiful light,
Following of who we say God,
By his soft, comforting words,
And left in such small time,
We are left here in emptiness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayne Davies 10 February 2014

Lovely! Well done to you!

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Lyn Paul 10 February 2014

Expressed beautifully Amber. It is never easy fair welling a loved one yet we all know that these times sadly effect us all. Thank you

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Leslie Philibert 10 February 2013

a poem that needs, I think, a frame or structure, emotions alone don`t work

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Sagar Shelar 10 February 2012

Really heart's close poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 10 February 2012

very good poem. thanks

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