Losing You! Poem by janice jolan

Losing You!

Rating: 5.0


Crowds swiftly roamed around,
Utters hi! as we shake hands.
toughness is as board exam,
to know the purest one.

Although progression comes,
Slowly like a growing plant.
The trunk may be reliable as years pass by,
Branches can be bendable like a rainbow in the sky.
Leaves may fall as it run dry,
Like my gloomy eyes when i sigh.

Oh please...hammer me! i am malleable...
Do it warily...
I am fragile, you cant take back deformities.

Losing You!
Thursday, August 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 10 October 2015

Leaves may fall as it run dry, Like my gloomy eyes when i sigh. There is a sad tone. it is touching the reader. a lovely poem indeed. liked it very much. tony

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Rajnish Manga 20 August 2015

How the life adapts to progression phases, has been underlined very beautifully in this poem. The photo is an icing on the cake. Thanks. A quote: Oh please...hammer me! i am malleable... Do it warily... I am fragile, you cant take back deformities.

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Kelly Kurt 20 August 2015

An absolutely lovely poem, Janice. Thank you

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