Loss? ? Or Gain? ? Poem by Nivedita Patnaik

Loss? ? Or Gain? ?

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Double crossed by fate
the symphony strayed
slumping...declining...sinking...sagging...
gashed... tumbling into the abyss
agitated..Furious...turbulent...
the knotty-complications stuck fervently...
the carcass of mortal part cemented...
.......the spirit...amused..Beams
the agony subsides....into lucid frolic...
....peals of laughter heard inside.

Nivedita Patnaik
Saturday, October 19, 2013
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Khairul Ahsan 02 December 2013

Loved your poem. Loved these lines: 'the agony subsides....into lucid frolic... ....peals of laughter heard inside.'

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Jetty J Newnham 19 October 2013

I can see this so beautiful beatiful!

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