Sunday, November 16, 2014

Lost In Starlight Comments

Rating: 3.7

When I slided from my mom's belly with fear,
Blinded by bright lights never seen before,
Terrific currents of air blocking my breath made me blubber,
Born with a pretty face! ! !
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Akshra GJ
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Jazib Kamalvi 06 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Akshara. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2014

The eye that can capture everything falls with lost starlight. Wonderful poem shared really.

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