Rahul Kirti

Rookie (06-07-1974 / India)

Lost In Winter - Poem by Rahul Kirti

Lost in winter

And its winter! ! ! Soft touch! !
Sensation in thoughts
Pushed corners of Yesterday
Whisper of morning dew calling..

Drift slipping inside with chill
Extended heart stretching
An unperformed history

Blame is not there,
Yet claim is still alive as kid
Like a dying fire

A story of unnoticed innocence
In the wind of material world

No loss either side, no lack of existence

Just a chance to feel loved was lost
Was lost………..


Comments about Lost In Winter by Rahul Kirti

  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/8/2010 8:49:00 PM)


    Drift slipping inside with chill
    Extended heart stretching
    An unperformed history------poetic prudence in perfection.10/10
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  • (2/6/2010 1:40:00 AM)


    Good...keep writing. I invite you to read some mine as well. I'm still new to the site myself. Keep up the good wk! (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2010 10:34:00 PM)


    Very nice poem.....pictures of a dark winter were painted in my mind. And yet they were very soothing. (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2010 1:05:00 PM)


    Welcome, I am excited for you. The piece flows effortlessly and its visual available. Pen is the paint brush to the poet; please keep writing....its fun enjoy! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 3, 2010



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