Lost In Your Eyes... Poem by Abiee Josy

Lost In Your Eyes...



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deep deep in your eyes a creature lost
around your globe of love
a heart burnt
but sympathy u gave
'I don't care! '
u don't seemed to care his attribute
u were careless towards his agony

I was astonished to see the modern time romeo


He got scrambled and ruined
and made his heart strong to climb up
his destiny was u
but he climbed up not barely; to become a noble person
the no mans land in your heart
s wat he need on u
the fragnance of rose from your heart
s where he want to creep on......
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Jaylyn 05 April 2018

i liked reading this poem

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Abe Josy 22 July 2013

thanku neetha. i wish i could come up wid more of poems.

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Neetha Sasidharan 17 July 2013

the modern romeo destiny was u - - liked them...nice poem.......do write more

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