Lost Love Poem by Jas Andrada

Lost Love

Rating: 5.0


Tell me young man
Why are you so numb?
You don’t care if I die
Yet you tell me I’m dumb

My heart is shouting at your ear
You’re so deaf that you can’t hear
Now I’m paralyzed with fear
‘Coz all things are so unclear

Why did you leave me for her?
Though she can’t love you truly
Please come back my long lost love
And I’ll cherish you dearly

Tonight if you’re not back
I’ll just cut my wrist and die
My heart will be as hard as rock
And I’ll keep these feelings in a lie

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 09 April 2009

a tip of the hat 2 u jasmine very well written indeed

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 January 2009

lovely write....with innocent touch.. ...touching....with fine flowing lines lines are full of love and longing but with a strong impulse on ending oneself...because of that lost love? ...very convincing piece.....keep on writing young girl..... may you read my 'smile Behind the Pain', young girl? thanks 10+++++ for this

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