Lost Love Comments
Tell me young man
Why are you so numb?
You don’t care if I die
Yet you tell me I’m dumb
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lovely write....with innocent touch.. ...touching....with fine flowing lines lines are full of love and longing but with a strong impulse on ending oneself...because of that lost love? ...very convincing piece.....keep on writing young girl..... may you read my 'smile Behind the Pain', young girl? thanks 10+++++ for this
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2/26/2026 2:41:54 PM # 1.0.0
a tip of the hat 2 u jasmine very well written indeed