Saturday, October 11, 2014

Lost Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her silky hair was blowing wild
From a gentle summer breeze
She was always here with me
Love came to us with ease
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NIGEL SANDERS
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Akhtar Jawad 11 October 2014

She cried wile she was leaving you. that shows she loved you. Why she left you is a mystery. You have described it in a very beautiful manner. The poem is impressive.

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