Love Poem by jessay lloyd

Love



your no longer around as my tears hit the ground, i no your love is out of bound but mine u found, i wish i could turn back time because back then everything was fine.there wasnt anything we couldnt climb because with every single tear it ends my year, your my one and only fear.i wish i wasnt awake so i couldnt feel my heart break coz you did fake and my soul you did take.with each second were apart my soul dies, cant you hear its cries? .you belong to me couldnt u see were meant to be? .i want to feel the soft breeze in my hair coz ill no you care.with all the love songs that remind me of you i could build a tower but i aint got the power, im an un picked flower.i hate all your lying, i hate the fact you left me crying is this the price i pay for trying? xxxxxx

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Josh Alfred 14 December 2008

This is a good expression, but you should spend more time editting before you post your work, to make it seem like you take publication seriously.

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Aanchal Chugh 05 December 2008

its really really good, i love it<33 keep posting :) comment mines please! -aanchal

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